Spore Galactic Adventure Storyboard Contest Winner

I just won the spore galactic adventure storyboard contest! The storyboard was made into a game by Maixs (the creator of Sims 3 & Sim City  etc...)
Download the game here:

* require Spore and Spore Galactic Adventure Expansion to play.
 Original storyboard:

Link to contest page: http://www.spore.com/comm/contests
Here is my original script for the story:

Mission Statement:
1.      Meaningless Turtle is the Patriarch of planet Myliff
a.       He is in a midlife crisis, thinking life is meaningless.
b.      If he loses the will to live, the whole planet will perish with him.
c.       Space Captain Coco must help Meaningless Turtle to find the meaning of life and save planet Myliff.
Act 1 – Wealth Guru of the West
2.      The Wealth Guru will only see you when you bring him seven spore coins.
a.       Goal 1: Find the seven wealthy merchants and collect seven spore coins.
b.      Captain Coco found the seven merchants in market Myliff…
                                                  i.      Rich Father Goat
                                                ii.      Rich Wifu Sheep
                                              iii.      Kareer Bunny
                                              iv.      Real Astate Pig
                                                v.      Stock Maggot
                                              vi.      Loottery Fish
                                            vii.      Rob the Ben
c.       Goal 2: Found Wealth Guru…
                                                  i.      Meaning of life? Meaning of life is money. With money you can buy happiness.
                                                ii.      "With the seven spore coins, I will sell you seven Happiness Chickens. You must bring them back to Meaningless Turtle."
d.      Meaningless Turtle:
                                                  i.      "You idiot, those Happiness Chickens are fake, they were made by the cheap labor in Planet Elbontia!"
                                                ii.      Don't you know money can't buy true happiness?
Act 2 – Health Guru of the North
3.      My only hope is to visit the Health Guru of the North.
a.       Goal 1: Before you can see the Health Guru, you have to defeat 3 epic monsters, Obadcity Slug, Smoking Dragon and Kalkuholic Witch.
b.      The Health Guru said, "The meaning of life is health. Without health, everything else is meaningless."
c.       Goal 2: The way to health is… insurance… "With insurance, you no longer need to worry about your health. Now, as a special deal, I'll sell you three insurance for the price of one. Bring these insurance back to Meaningless Turtle, he will have a healthy life."
d.      When Captain Coco brings the 3 insurance back to Meaningless Turtle, he is angry. "You idiot, you have been tricked by the old man. You should never buy anything from him."

Act 3 – Love Guru of the East
1.      Now my final hope is the Love Guru of the East, mayhap she knows the meaning of life. You must bring her 7 happiness chickens yes I know they are fake, but if you wrap it up nicely, she may not notice it.
a.       Goal 1: Captain Coco has to sneak pass the Jealuck Sea Bear and the Miss Trust Lion before he finds the Love Guru.
b.      When he presents the Happiness Chickens, the Love Guru recognizes the Chickens as fake… "Aren't those made in Elbontia?" But she was not angry.
c.       Goal 2: "Bring me 7 happiness chickens from the Forest of Friends, those are the only real happiness chickens."
d.      So Captain Coco Travels to the Forest of Friends and hunt down 7 happiness chickens.
e.       The hunting of Happiness Chickens has anger the ancient guardian of the forest, and three epic monsters stood before his path….
                                                  i.      The Disease Skeleton
                                                ii.      The Aging Mammoth
                                              iii.      And Kill Fiy Akkident
f.       Thanks to the Health Guru. Captain Coco got insurances. He defeated the Disease Skeleton with the Medical Insurance, The Aging Mammoth with the Life insurance and the Kill Fiv Akkident by Auto Insurance
g.      When he returns the Happiness Chickens to the Love Guru, she is happy. "Thank you, Space Captain. To reward your kindness of, I'll give you two bottles of Love wine. The first Bottle is Love yourself. The second Bottle is Love others. Tell the Meaningless Turtle, he must share one bottle of the wine with his friend and they must drink equally from each bottle. And his life will be full of love. Do you understand?"
h.      "But is this the meaning of life?"
i.        The Love Guru shakes her head. "This is only part of it. The meaning of life is everything you have received in your journeys. The 7 happiness chickens, the 3 insurances and these 2 love potions. And when you combine these numbers together, you will get the meaning of life."
j.        "7+3+2=12? I got it! The meaning of life is 12!" Captain Coco Return to the Meaningless turtle and tells him the meaning of life is 12.
Act 4 – Sandwich Maker of the South
2.      The Meaningless Turtle thanks Captain Coco for the wine but he said 12 means nothing to him. He must be mistaken.

1. "Now please find the mysterious sandwich maker of the south. And give him one bottle of wine. Perhaps he knows the mystery of numbers."
2. Captain Coco finds the sandwich maker.
3. "Thanks for the wine… and the answer to your question is multiplication."
4. "Multiplication?"
5. "Yes, the Meaning of life is the 7 Happiness Chicken x 3 Insurances x 2 Love potions…"
6. "7x3x2=42? The meaning of life is 42?"
7. "Yes. The meaning of life includes every part of your journey. When you look at them individually, it means nothing. But when multiplied together, you journey becomes an Epic Adventure."

Act 5 – Ending
1.      Captain Coco returns to Meaningless Turtle, "The meaning of life is 7x3x2=42! It's 42!"
2.      Meaningless Turtle, "Yes 42. Yes that does ring a bell… It's the activation code of my space ship. Thank your Space Captain Coco, now I can activate my space ship and go on my Galactic Adventure! That is indeed my meaning of life!"
 
Finally, planet Myliff is saved.
 
Mission Accomplished.